There are largely two types of people according to
whether which type of work they prefer: those who like to have their own
business and those who like to work for their employer. It has been accepted
(do not be so conclusive on any idea in your essay)
that working for somebody else is better than working for themselves because
they did (do) not need to worry about
their own business. However, I believe that being self-employed is great jobs.
In this essay, I will explain two briefly reasons supporting my opinion.
First of all, I can make more money when I work for
myself rather than for other person. This is because I am employer not
employee. I can decide to distribute money among my co-workers. Also, if I work
all by myself, I will have total money which I earn through my business.
Therefore, that people have(-ing) their
own business is better than working for others.
Second, if I get to do what I really want to do, I (will / might) have huge passion for my work. So, it
is more efficient since this work is one of ways which make my dream come true.
For example, my uncle have (has) been
self-employed since 1991. Actually, he was worker in a large enterprise. He
quitted his work and started restaurant business. He have (had) had hard time during the first two years but he
never gave up his work because he wanted to succeed in the fields (business = ‘field’ is for studies). He did his best
and finally he could achieve the desired result. Nowadays, his restaurant is
pretty well-known in Seoul and he make(s) a lot
of money a month. This example clearly shows that it is great things to
work for themselves (oneself).
In conclusion, although many people say that working
for other people is comfortable, I am convinced that being an employer have
(has) a lot of advantage rather than being an
employee for above two reasons.