■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The
lecturer argues that the recent speculations about the roles of Lambeosaurus’ crest
are unreasonable.
First, she asserts
that Lambeosaurus would search for their mates by noise, not appearance. She suggests
a study that alligators, similar species to Lambeosaurus, interact with each other through sounds to attract their partner. This contradicts the reading passage’s
claim that the crests were tools of mating methods.
Next, the lecturer (단락이 바뀌었기 때문에 처음에 대명사를 쓰시면 안 됩니다) contends that the crests were inadequate to fights. Unlike the horns of
Triceratops which are hard and able to attack enemies, Lambeosaurus’ crests are
too fragile to use it for combat. This refutes the reading passage’s claim that the
crests may have been used as weapons.
Finally,
she claims that the crests were hardly used to supply air to the dinosaur. Considering
the huge size of Lambeosaurus, its relatively small crests could not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요.) store
enough oxygen to use it practically. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s
idea that Lambeosaurus could breathe underwater by its crests. |
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1. intro의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*