There is a controversy over whether having numerous
friends is better than having a few friends. While some people would like to
have as many friends as they can since it makes them look like they are popular
and it looks more fun, I strongly believe that having several close friends is
much better. This is because a small group number of friends understands
each other well and can spend more (better)
quality time together.
First of all, you and your close several
friends are able to understand each other not only deeply but also
well (understanding well and deeply actually mean
the same don’t they?). This is because if you meet and associate with
just a few friends, it is much easier for you to talk about your deep thoughts and
focus on the talk. Hence you and your friends can know each other more
deeply through the conversation. According to a recent study, people tend to
share about their in-depth thoughts and worries when they meet a fewer friends.
The reason of this is that people do not feel comfortable to talk(-ing) about their personal matters since the
environment is noisy and is not proper for the serious talk when they are in a
large group. On the other hand, people feel more at ease when they are with
just a few friends since it is a quiet ambiance that makes it possible to have
a deep conversation. Therefore they can have the better understanding about
each other via their deep talk.
Second, you are able to spend more meaningful time
with a small number of friends. This is because if you hang out with many
friends, you would find it really hard to make decisions to satisfy everyone's minds
(demands), bringing about more conflicts between
friends. For instance, when I was a freshman in college, I got along with nine
friends at the first semester. It was fun at first but before long the problem
came up. It was very difficult to gather and do something together with (in unity) a single mind. We even could
not (even) easily decide what to eat. Since each
one has so many different tastes, hobbies and personalities. After all(,) our group was divided into smaller groups. It made
us more happy (happier) because we did
not need to have difficulty of unifying and doing some activities together
anymore.
(The points are clear and there are less
grammar mistakes. Nice work!)