■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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▶ Your Answer : Disagree
Even if some people agree with the statement that teacher whose students are learned more should be paid more, I disagree with it from my perspective. How can people measure the amount of students learned? The measurement of learning could be score of students or survey by students would make some problems in terms of motivation and education.
First of all, if teachers are paid by quantities how much their students’ learned, it might have a bad effect on teachers as being a true educator. To be specific, because of various types of students’ preference for studying and their interest in studying, it seems like that all needs for education could not be satisfied by one teacher or at the same time. Accordingly, in spite of teachers hard working for encourage their students in many ways, sometimes it could not work on some students and it would ensue judging their reputation lower than reality. What it comes to get lower evaluation than their effort in their job is that they do not have motivation to encourage their students such as disscussing the reason why they need to study, and just do force them to get a higher score so that teacher himself get a better evalution.
Secondly, how much their students learn does not the only representatives, the duties of teachers. Specifically, there are many other qualities and roles of teachers such as showing responsibility, guiding right way with moral aspect, and building a pleasant memory of school life to students. School is not a place just for learning knowledge. I believe school is the place where human understand what human being is, why people live together, and how people feel and share their emotion at an early in life. As following meaning of school, teachers also should do their role as a grown up or human being. Thus, the work that teachers have to do is not only teach student, so they should not be judged by how much students learn. If teachers earn their payment based on the amount whose students learn, there is possibility for teacher to focus only the score or the grade whose students gotten. Moreover, making matter worse, it is hard to make students be responsible and get along with each other due to fierce competition within an educational atmosphere getting a good score. This attitude of teachers may give students a certain wrong message which could be planted in their brain that the most important thing is score and rank of their study. For example, these kinds of happening are really done in South Korea. At some private schools in that country, the fact that teachers actually paid salary by average grade of their students, result in twice ratio of happening tragedy that students suicide due to their decreased score than other schools per year. Although the suicide have not been caused by just how their teacher earn money and how teachers treat their students, it is true that the relationship and correlation exist between payment-judgement way of teacher and the higher rate of suicide happening. In these aspects, we sholud not overlook the result from instituting this way of payment just for according to their students’ score or knowledge, we need to keep in mind about teachers’ duty and the point of view to be required to give the young lessons guiding thier life.
To sum up, I do not agree with the idea that teachers have to paid with degrees of whose students learn, as long as it can reduce the motivation to teach and it may create some phenomenon that teachers educate wrong lessons to the students. | |
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