A common misconception is that individuals can do
something about environmental issues on their own, despite the fact that there
is complexity of (to) it. It is world nature
that something must be achieved when an enormous of group combine. (Achieve the nature? This sentence is confusing) In my
perspective, there is probably a resolution to overcome
the problems, (resolution = resolutions, plural)
yet it would not have a profound effect on it.
Public transportation systems, as such as bus and subway, can be a solution about (to) environmental
issues. To be specific, since majority of people (living)
in cutting-edge cities or pollution-filled cities have their own car, it (that) contaminates
air. The emission of gas from vehicles largely affects on air pollution. According
to the study conducted by Seoul University Environmental team, the unhealthy
gas released from vehicles is a major cause of air pollution. It is a (the) second to none (most severe) among
many causes. The air pollution has been worsening since (the) car (was) invented. Such problem
can be alleviated, if people start to not use their own vehicle.
(State your opinion more clearly. You want
to make a point that individuals won’t be able to do much for the environment.
People drive a lot. So? It is your job to establish the missing connection.)
Alternatively, as previously mentioned, problems cannot
be relieved, unless many people get together and take an action. This is due to
the fact that there would not be any change if a person follows the action that provided from (according
to) the study of (by) university. Even though
(so), some of people actually have been tried to relieve the problem and take the action, (but) nothing
change yet. The help of individual cannot be just
a more than a little challenge (to a greater development). Let’s assume, (that) there
are thirty students who hate to study in a
class. If a person tries to study hard for their school reputation, will all (the) rest of
twenty nine students suddenly change their mind and study? No, they won’t. It
is a (the) same
logic as the environmental issues. (This part is
colloquial. Follow the standard steps of providing an example, even if it
sounds to weary.)
Granted, the environmental issues might be relieved by
taking public transportation. Nevertheless, the problem will not be actually
solved, unless a cluster of people
try (together / collectively).