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It is evident that in our current society innovative ability has a tremendous importance in our lives. Some people believe that the best way to achieve success is to follow what other people do instead of doing something different while others do not. I however believe that following what other people do instead of doing something different is not necessarily the best way to achieve success. There are several reasons that I could discuss to support my argument so i will limit my discussion to the topic.
First, there are exceptions. Also, following what other people do is not correct.
First of all, the most important reason for my feeling this way is following what other people do is not always the best way to achieve success. There are some times when we can achieve uccess by doing something different. Thus, it can be said that following what other people do is not the best way to achieve success becasue there are always exceptions. This reminds of a time when I was a junior in college. I was able to get a promotion quickly when i did something different unlike other people. I invented the Banana Phone which has been sansational. This led our company to one of the profitable electronics in Korea. Consequently, I became a COO. In contrast, my friend David Cho who follow what other do is normal employee to this day in 10 years after he entered his company. As my experience shows that following what other people do is not always the best way to achieve success becasuse of exceptions.
Second, another reason which proves my point is that following what other people do is simply not correct some times. If following what other people do were the best way to achieve success would always have to be correct. However, there are many cases where this does not apply. Take my friend Tomas who is painter, for example. He followed his friend's work. He was at the first place in a National Convention. However, this was what violate The Copyright Act. Eventually, he has been imprisoned for 5 years. This examples clearly shows that following what other people do is not the best way to achieve success because it is not correct.
All things considered, with the reasons mentioned above, I believe that I have sufficiently and adequately explained my position on the matters regarding this topic. |