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Mankind have always chased after new, inexperienced things, and they achieved almost all the things they dreamed of after trying millions of times with their will. Still, there are many novelties left for human kind to take adventure, and one of those places is ‘outer space’. I myself also understand the curiosity about the place that mankind has never inhabited, and the competition between countries. However, I would strongly disagree with this exploration when it comes to a selection between spending money in this field or for the basic needs on Earth.
Most of all, all the people are not living a happy life; there are still ones that need help for higher qualities of life. Unlike centuries ago, people have became aware of the affairs happening in nations and continents thousands of kilometers away, with the drastic improvement in technology. Hence, now we know that there are people who are suffering from poverty, lack of basic infrastructure, children who work for over 10 hours a day, and many other fatal problems, and nations thereby carried the responsibility of helping them. Since ‘making world a better place to live’ has become an objective of all nations and mankind, it is natural to spend as much budget as possible for this objective.
Secondly, the competition of exploring the outer space is not as important as it has been told, but is a method to show a country’s strength. For example, in the Cold War era, the U.S. and the USSR put as much effort as possible to land on and investigate other stars and planets. And as a more recent example, the DPRK and Republic of Korea has competed against each other with who would be the first to shoot a satellite into orbit. Since it can be a crucial point in measuring a country’s strength and ability, many countries are putting effort in it. However, this will not be a big matter in front of keeping the world’s peace and happiness of the overall people.
For these reasons above, I strongly believe that the first thing that mankind has to solve is the happiness and peace of people inhabiting on this ‘Earth’, and the best solution for now would be to help people who lack basic supplies. I believe that expeditions in outer space should be the second to be considered.
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