▶ Your Answer : Some people think that universities should spend as much money on sports as they do on libraries but other people say not. However, I agree with this statement because sports promote physical health and it encourage students to interact. First of all, sports promote students' physical health. In universities, most students spend a lot of time sedentary because they study. It makes students unhealthy or obesity. However, if universities invest much money in sports, students become more healthier. For example, my cousin was an obesity and she decided to start exercise. Then she joined tennis club in campus. It was very helpful to her and she lost weight after joining tennis club. If university had not invested in tennis facilities, she can't use this club. Second of all, sports encourage students to interact. This is very useful way to meet people and make relationship. In sports club, many students spend their time with their team to practice because sports require cooperation. For instance, when I was middle school, I was part of soccer club. Through this club, I got a new group of friends and also learned how to cooperate with other people. To sum up, sports promote physical health and encourage students to interact. In this regard, I think that universities should provide as much funding for students' sports activities as they do for their libraries.
이제 막 공부 시작하는 단계네요.. 그래서 분량도 300자 채우는게 아직 쉽지가 않아요.. 부족한점이 가득가득하지만 첨삭 부탁드립니다....^^ |