Universities should provide as much money for sports programs as for their libraries. Do you agree or disagree with that view? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer.
These days, many students do not be easy to activity sports programs and read various books because they think that it is more important to study than to exercise and read a book. Also, they might know textbook’s contents but have not general knowledge in the world, and their healthy is decreasing caused by they usually do not enjoy spots to improve theirs. To solve these problems, for example, first, I think that universities have responsibility to improve students’ physical healthy. Second, as students spent their more time in their university, students’ well-being should be made in university. So, I agree with that view.
First, universities have responsibilities about improving students’ physical ability. For example, there are many facilities that are swim pool, tennis room, baseball room, and so on in my university. When I entered my university in last year, I hate sports. But, the university should give me 3grades about physical activity in one semester. So, I should take classes for sports programs. As I took classes in last semester, I have been interested in physical activities. Also, my healthy might increase than before.
Second, universities are other parents. So, they should be made their students’ well-being. As parents give their offspring many loves, universities are like them. Also, if universities give students many things, they might get more profits. For example, poor student give money for participating contest, so the man might be first prize in the contest. It could be advantage for university. Thus, It gives many things for anyone.
For these reasons, universities should provide as much money for sports programs as for their libraries. If most universities do these works, their students could improve their own physical abilities and increasing their knowledge. Also, university and their students could get many advantages to provide the money.
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