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Some
people argue that cooperating with each other is more crucial for contemporary
people compared to our forefathers. However, as far as I am concerned, I
strongly agree with the statement that ancient civilization needed more
cooperation than nowadays. This is because it was so difficult to maintain
lives without any cooperation at the past. Another reason for my opinion is
that we can do almost everything alone thanks to the development of the
Internet. In this essay, I will briefly present two main ideas to support my
opinion.
To begin with, it is more essential to cooperate with each other
because of a laborious farming. To be more specific, at the time of agriculture
society, it was too harsh for peasants to do farming alone by utilizing just
fundamental tools, so they need to do collective works. I know that there are
many farmers in our society, but even though how hard it is, it is not
comparable to the suffering of ancestors’ labor because there are lots farming equipment
in recent days. To exemplify, before the development of the tractor, farmers
should help each other to grind spacious grounds. As a result, the need of cooperation
with others was more significant in ancient times.
On top of that, contemporary people do not need any help of other
people because of the invention of the Internet. What I mean is that, by using
the Internet, ordinary person can approach to professional information even he
or she is not majored in the field where information came from. To be more
specific, it became possible to found a corporation with a minimum of cooperation.
It is a well-known story that Mark Zuckerberg, who is the CEO of Facebook,
founded Facebook with little help. Commonly, Facebook is not considered as a
result of cooperation but a result of a creative idea.
In conclusion, I firmly maintain that ancient civilization needed more cooperation than nowadays on account of the reasons that
I mentioned above; it was hard to sustain without any cooperation in ancient
time and it is easier to success without magnificent cooperation in contemporary
days in comparison with last days.
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