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First of all,
public recognition can allow people to always make a big money through income
of advertisement on television or radio. To be specific, since most people in
modern society usually spend a significant of time watching television or
listening radio, advertisement companies want to use famous figurers who have high
recognition in order to maximize their benefit. Therefore, people who are
famous and popular are always able to make a lot of money whenever they want
to. For example, one of the most famous soccer players in my country is Ji-sung
Park. He made great accomplishment in his life. Since many advertisement
companies are strongly interested in hiring him as their advertisement`s model,
he can require them as many money as he wants. Through this example, it is
clear that gaining public recognition can allow them to make a lot of money
whenever they want to.
Second, public recognition
can last a longer than money. Even if I have vast amount of money, money will
be disappeared some day in the future. On the other hand, public recognition
will last a longer than money, even recognition can remain after you will pass
out. Therefore, gaining public recognition is much better rather than having
much money. To illustrate, one of the previous Korea presidents, Jung Hee Park,
is now considered to be a hero of our country even he passed out very long time
ago. Some people say that his public recognition in Korea cannot be measured by
money. Therefore, public recognition is more important.
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