■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
After graduation from high school, students should take a year off to travel or work before going to university. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Let’s think about a person's life. A person can live for about 80 years, and has a lot of experiences for a long times. A person works and earns to live in the life. Therefore, I think that students graduated from high school should take a year off to travel before going to university, so students can take many experiences, and be extended their view by seeing new things thorough travel.
First of all, I think that people should work and earn to live, of course. For these reason, perhaps, for a half of life of about 80 years, most people will live by working, so it is difficult for people to have free time to travel. Therefore, I think that students graduated from high school need to take a year off to travel before going to university, also I think that students can working as a part time job while students go to university and it is not too late to work after graduation from university.
Secondly, I think that taking off to travel is more benefit than working for students. Because, these days, a society has fast been changing, if students have more many experiences and have times that they can think of oneself through travel, I think that they can raise a capacity to adapt in this society’s environment. Consequently, I think that they will lead their life to more good direction than current their position.
As mentioned above, I think that it is better to take off to travel for students than working before going to university. | |
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