It has been said that students should focus more the (on) general
education in the school. Although such an argument has some merits, I believe
that students benefit more by studying specific careers and fields than by
studying general subjects. The reason behind this is that specific study enables
to students more concentrate (more)
on studying. Additionally, it helps student better prepare to succeed.
First of all, students are more likely to concentrate
on studying the specific careers and
fields (when…). It is common that people become
more active in learning and feel more responsibility when they think it is
important in their lives. On the other hand, students easily get bored when
they are forced to study general subjects which are not directly related to them (their interest).
According to the report released from the National Human Development Institute,
people were surveyed about which (what) makes them intrigue(d)
to study (the) most at
(during) schooldays. More than any other several
answers, subjects related to their future career came
out on top for (was chosen by) the
majority of survey respondents. It is also mentioned that even though they
acknowledge that general subject is indispensable for graduation, they studied
specific vocational subjects (concentration / subject) more.
Furthermore, specific classes for careers and fields
can help (students) to success (succeed)
in the future. Through these trainings at school, not only have students gotten
ready to be a professional for
(in the) a long time (run), but also they can hone their particular skills that are not able to learn (taught)
in the society. Compared to such students, those who have studied only general
subjects at school days cannot defeat over
them in the society. For example, my sister who wanted to be a famous cook
decided to go to the school that had special classes for being a chef. She was
exposed to the real implements (skills) being used by professional cook and able to
learn directly from world-famous chefs. Without this special experience and
knowledge, she would not have been such a popular master chef for (of) Korean foods for
now.
In a nutshell, I have no doubt that university and
high schools inquire (require) students to learn specific careers and
fields before their graduations. This is because special learning for
career can make students more focus (more) on their learning. What's more, this helps
students to obtain their successful careers in the future.