There has been heated debate on whether cars have influenced more to the society more than planes have. Some may agree with this while others deem otherwise. However, I strongly believe that automobiles play have played a bigger role than planes have. Cars have promoted the size of the market to grow. In addition it has also allowed people to move to outer city suburbs which have affected life styles as well. In this regard I agree with the statement above.
The first reason for my argument is that the size of the market has expanded. In this competitive society, firms race each other to gain bigger market size than others. Probably one of the most main priorities to gain bigger market size is to distribute goods as efficiently and quickly as possible. If not then despite how distinguished and cheap the product is it is not worth it(it 이 무엇을 설명하는지 써주시면 좋겠습니다. 예: it -> production). Before cargo trucks were existed most products were sold near where products were first manufactured. This restricted the size of the market and even if there were horse powers or boat to supply goods the number of supply was too limited. For instance, in the Harvard Business case study, I read an article how US was able to grow its economy strength after cars were mass produced. As more numbers of roads and cars were available, goods were able to be distributed all over the nation. This example, illustrates how automobiles have affected business and the size of the market to grow.
Another reason for my opinion is that people’s life has changed as they were able to live outside of the urban area. Though living middle of the city seems favorable as there are more convenient facility facilities and infrastructures, there are a lot of issues with living at in down town downtown. People, especially young kids, are more exposed to crimes and car accidents. Also there is no nature beauty which people can enjoy due to the severe pollution. However, these issues were all resolved as cars were mass produced [이대로 번역하면 '자동차를 대량생산하면서 환경오염도 해결 되었다'가 됩니다. 이것을 뜻 하신건가요?] . According to the a recent study done by Seoul National University, the numbers of people moving to outside out of the city have increased by 10% every year. People claim they are more pleased and safe at uptown compared to downtown. Like mentioned in the example, automobiles have played an essential role in helping people to dwell at uptown.
Subsequent to mulling over this query, I support that cars have had a more pivotal role than planes have.
질문이 "자동차가 비행기보다 사회에 더 큰 영향을 끼쳤나요?"입니다. "자동차가 사회에 큰 영향을 끼쳤나요?"가 아니라. -비행기의 영향에 관한 것을 언급하시고 두개를 비교한 다음에 상대적으로 자동차의 영향이 더 컸다- 식으로 전개를 하시는 것이 더 효과적입니다.