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There is an argument over whether young people enjoy life more than older people do. Some people believe that young people enjoy their life than older people do, as they are young and have many opportunities to do something. My view, however, is that young people don't have much time and money to enjoy their life. Moreover, they are very sensitive to trivial mistakes, they can't see long-term of their life.
To begin with, young people have no enough time and money to enjoy their lives. This is largely because, they have to do many things, such as studying, doing some internship and extra, and they don't have much money to go to travel as they can't earn a lot of paychecks. According to the study conducted by the team of Oxford University, more than 75% of the 20's mentioned that they spend their much of time doing some work or study. The study also suggest that older people who are more than 45 years old much enjoy their life than under 45 years old. Therefore, young people don't enjoy their life as much as older people do.
In addition, young people have a tendency to sensitive their small mistakes. It leads them always nervous or annoyed about something they doing. Generally, It is well known fact that young people have no variety experience than older people. It hinder young people from foresee the long-term future. For instance, when I was in a high school, I always worried about my test scores. That day, I think my test scores are most important things in my life. So I usually upset when I screw up my test. However, my mom always told me that it is important things to you now, but it is not most important things in my life. See the bright side on your future, It will fertilize to you and you become grown up. When I was young, I didn't understand my mother’s mentioned. But when I grown up I understand what that means. Had not been for worrying about my test every time that day, I would have spent my school life enjoyable.
To sum up, I object that young people enjoy life more than older people do. First, young people don't have much time and money. Furthermore, they are to timid about their trivial mistakes, so they always worried about something. For those reasons, I think it is impossible to young man enjoy life than older man do. |