Prior to making a decision about what characteristics
are important to be successful in life,
I would first like to define the meaning of a
successful life as a life which is happy and rich.
Based on the inference (definition), I
believe that the most important factors for a successful life are a
feeling of satisfaction and an act of sharing.
First of all, a feeling
of satisfaction is essential for living a successful life, that is, (which is) living an affluent life. Putting it
differently, not knowing about satisfaction can mean that you are poor all the
time.
Even though you earn ten million dollars monthly by
doing a business independently, if you are not satisfied with the revenue that
you are making, you will not feel yourself being successful or rich. Likewise,
even thought you get one thousand dollars every month by working for a company,
if you feel satisfied with it, you will be the same as a billionaire. In this
regard, a person who is successful in life is the one who knows about the
feeling of satisfaction.
In addition, in order to live a successful life, in other words, to be happy, one
should be able to share what they already have with others. As various social
researches show, people find themselves extremely happy and successful by
giving helps such as donating their assets and sharing their foods. These
benevolent acts to share what one has with others (also)
increase addtitionally self-respect, which is another factor of leading
to a successful life, by receiving appriciation
or approval from others and society. (There’s
no need to clarify self-respect) In this respect, giving a help or
sharing with others is a paramount factor of being able to live a successful
life.
(Try to write shorter. Leave off any unnecessary
description or clarification. Before writing anything, think whether it’s really
needed.)
Ultimately, it is not all that easy to answer about exactly
what characteristics are essential to be successful in life since a successful
life in itself (as it) is an extremely subject(ly) matter and depends where one puts their values.
Personally, I think that the important factors to a successful life are feeling
of contentment and sharing what you
got.