These days, many people prefer to live in a
modern apartment building which
usually located in the city because it is easy to use public transportation and
there are lots of convenient facilities. However in my opinion, I want to live
in a traditional house in the country. In a
traditional house(,) people can live in peace
and fresh air which are good for their health.
First of all, in a traditional
house, I do not need to upset about noisy
(be disturbed by noise). Usually the atmosphere
in traditional house is peaceful, (and / so) after
finishing my work I can rest very well. In the apartment, always I should
here (always hear) the noise such as (from) car
or children so I would get stress(ed out because of)
from them. For example, my
grandmother’s home is a traditional house in the country so (when)ever I visit her house I think I am relaxed in claim and quiet atmosphere. I think live(ing) in a traditional house would be more helpful for
my health than living in a modern apartment.
On top of that, people can live in the fresh air in a traditional house. Now(a)days, air pollution is a serious problem.
Especially in apartment, there could be harmful chemical(s) things (that) could occur
(lead to) disease to
people. If I have (had) a child, I do
(would) not want to live in apartment with negative chemical(s /
toxic emissions) things. Sometimes we can easily see the people are
suffering from respiration disease (respiratory infection) because of air pollution (such
emission). They move to the traditional house for their health. No
parents want(s) to live (with) their child in the air pollution I think.
In conclusion, I think living in a
traditional house is better than (living) in a
modern apartment building. Maybe people can enjoy convenient facility in a
modern apartment. However, stressful noise will (be) negative
to their mental health and air pollution would
negative for their physical health. There is nothing is (as) important than
(as) our health.