In
today`s society, it is widely believed that a high-paying jobs with long hours
that would give little time with family is much better rather than a low-paying
jobs with short time and having more
time with family. However, I disagree with this view. I firmly believe having
low paying job and a lot of time with family or friends is much important. This
is because first, it allows people to relieve stress, second workers who have
jobs with short hours can spend more time with their kids.
First of all, people who spend enough time with
their family or friends can relieve mental stress easily. To be more specific, it`s
fairly believed that people are likely to feel satisfied with their lives and
happy whenever they spend time with loved one. Thus, they can effectively
relieve mental stress from works by talking to loved ones and drinking a cup of
coffee together after work. On the other hand, even though the one who spend
more time at company are able to get high payment, it does not mean they are happier
or satisfied with their lives because they tend to get stressed easily due to
heavy workload and have less opportunity to relieve stress. Thus, people who
have jobs with short hours can relieve stress and have a good life rather than
those who have jobs with long hours that causes heavy workload.
Second, people who have jobs with short hours can
spend more time with their kids. To be specific, having time with their
children and make firm relationship with their kids are very important because
kids are usually vulnerable to feel lonely due to their weak mental system. So,
if their parents have jobs with long hours, their children will spend most of
their time at home alone, consequently they are more likely to feel lonely,
which as a result may cause a fatal mental disorder. In addition, According to
study done by Korea Education Research in 2013, it revealed that children who
have had plenty of time with their family can have better excellent education
skills and memories. On the other hand, kids with parents who have jobs with
long hours usually have problems about lack of concentration. Therefore, jobs
with short hours have more beneficial effects than one with long hours.
All
things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has
been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
Never should we forget.