(Building a large factory near a residential
area) It is a double edged sword, for building a large factory near a community.
There are (is)
possibilities of environmental
pollution. However, I would like to support that
building large factory because large factory will help increasing economic profits in local area which is included (I don’t know
what you mean) our community for below reasons.
To begin (with), a
large factory gives opportunities to increase the job market. There always is a huge number of job
needed near large factory. Large factories tend to look for people near them.
It is also good for the factory because they don’t need to bring people for (to) work
from far away with higher salary due to transportation fee. Contrastingly,
local small factory can shut down and that means job markets can shrink. So,
people from small factory can contend that a large factory should not come in
their community, if their market area will
overlap(s) and it
could affect their own. (It’s hard to
understand why you are writing about the ‘small factories’) For example,
my friend’s father changed his job with nice salary when Samsung semiconductor
factory moved to Cheon-An city. (I don’t get the
sentence, sorry) While this point of
view, if a large factory comes, it would be helpful for developing
competitiveness. Then it makes much nicer
(improves) technology, it will makes more
places for
hiring in that area. Thus big factory would increase the job market and it is
helpful for one’s society economic
development.
(As the paragraph started off with the economic
benefits of a large factory, stick to it and Do Not introduce any new reasons,
say, technological development. This hurts the composition of the essay.)
On top of that, to build a large factory can give
enormous economical wealth indirectly
such as real estates
increases (increase in housing price),
(improved) traffic systems, (and the) immigrant’s rushes from the other
community. For example, the price of my hometown’s real-estate increased around
10 times after Samsung factory came. Then(,) we (also) had a subway since the population increased. In
contrast, some people insist that large factory will make more crime and
environment(al) pollution after all the economy will decrease in local community.
However, this could (be) prevent(ed) with people’s own exertion
(effort).
To sum up, building a large factory would be
beneficial to our community for economical profits. It will generate bigger job
markets as wells as indirect economical
wealth. For these reasons, I strongly support building a large factory in my
community.