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Some people believe that television has deprived friends and family of time to talk. However, contrary to this opinion, I strongly believe that television helps people to have time to talk together. The fundamental reason behind this is that television can bring family members on spot.
First of all, television advances building stronger relationships. An important reason is that television can make family members who have been busy every day come and get together. Thus, family memers members naturally have a small talk and bond with each other. For example, when I was in high school, I studied without intimating with friends. I hoped to get along with them, but I was too passive to talk with them. After that, I watched a drama that is being popular, and when classmates talked about it, I tried sharing it. Later we shared worried worries and concerns about personal matters. This was because television gave us something news or debatable details to talk. In addition, television reduces the gab gap between old and young generations. This is the due to fact, watching television provide a lot of information that shows past and present life. So this let relationships between parents and children close much more with conversation. From my experience, I made a big trouble at school; my parents came to apologize to other student's mother with tearing. When I saw it, I did not have any feeling. And then few months later, I had a chance to watch the situation in drama that I have had. At As the result, I could understand my mother's feeling and I regretted that I made the trouble. And I said to her, I was sorry at the time with hug warmed.
In conclusion, without any doubt, it is clear that television promotes communication among people. The reason is that television enables family and friends get closer and spend time together.
문법이나 글은 잘 쓰셨습니다. 하지만 읽는 입장에서는 토픽에 대한 내용이 조금 약한 거 같습니다. 하이라이트한 부분이 강력하게 느껴지는데 그런 부분을 더 토픽과 관련된 내용이면 좋을 거 같습니다.
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