■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Reading → a college education provides many benefits. Listening → contradicts this argument |
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▶ Your Answer : The reading passage contends that a college education provides many benefits and is a good way to prepare for the future. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument. First, the speaker argues that students who have college degrees are not easy to find jobs after their education. This is because too many students have college degrees, so most of them become unemployed or underemployed notwithstanding their bachelor's degrees. This casts doubts on the reading passage's claim that students who have college degrees will find it much easier to find a job. Second, according to the lecturer, it is wrong to say that college graduates are able to obtain higher quality jobs that increase their overall marketability of the employee. The reason is that on-the-job training is already manualized. For example, if computer does not work, they should call the IT guy, because they were not taught of how to fix it. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that high quality of job training can make college graduates be more satisfied with their jobs. The final point made by the lecturer is that it is true that jobs that require higher education tend to pay significantly higher salaries than other jobs, but not all. This is supported by the case of the job, bartenders. They can earn high salaries, but do not need to have degrees. None of these jobs need higher degrees, even though it is hard to get a huge amount of money. This counters the reading passage's argument that jobs that require higher education pay significantly higher salaries than other jobs. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*