■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : In twenty year there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is debatable whether there will be fewer cars in use than
there are today in twenty years. This is an intriguing question because
opinions concerning this can be different relying on individual perspectives.
In my opinion, however, I agree with the statement for the following subsequent
two reasons. To begin with, the government will regulate the number of
cars in their country. As the economy of one's country gets better, a lot of
cars are created annually. However, the carbon dioxides released by cars cause
negative effect on our environment such as an air pollution or global warming.
In addition, cars provoke many social issues like traffic congestion or car
accidents. To make up for these problems, the government would decrease the
number of cars in their country. For example, the government of my country
announced new regulation policy to reduce the use of cars a month ago. This
policy was set to prevent further environmental issues and lower the death rate
caused by car accidents. In effect, it is making positive changes in my
country. I believe this type of policy would be announced to other countries in
a few years. (어떻게 regulate 한다는건지 자세한 설명이 필요합니다.) On top of that, there will be more investment in public
transportation. These days, technology develops at a fast rate. Since cars cause
many problems as I mentioned above, engineers all over the world would research
how to improve the public transportation. Thus, the public transportation would
be faster, more comfortable and even affordable. For instance, when I was a
high school student, my city renovated the subway route and quality of station
facility completely. It must have been costly, however (대소문자 구분) (대중교통의 발달이 삶에 어떠한 영향을 가져오는지, outweigh advantage of car 하는지 서술해주세요), most of the citizens in
my city including me were satisfied with new renovation. As a result, the car
usage in my city was considerably reduced. Someday, this will happen all over
the globe not only in my city.
In a nutshell, the government will try to diminish the number
of cars in their country. Moreover, people would pay attention to public
transportation to improve. In this regard, I strongly believe that the number
of cars will be decreased as time goes by.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 디테일이 많이 부족한 아쉬운 에세이입니다.
무언가를 설명할 때는 최대한 구체적으로 설명해주세요.
3. goverment -> government
꼭 기억해주세요!
수고하셨습니다. *^^*