■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the
author's claim that there are several plausible evidences that dinosaurs were
endotherms. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a
rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor
contends that dinosaur's fossils of the polar region cannot prove the
dinosaur's characteristics. the polar region might have been warmer than today.
In addition, the dinosaurs would have migrated from the polar region to the
warmer place because of the cool temperature. Furthermore, they would have done
hibernation. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the
dinosaur's fossils of the polar region indicate the dinosaur's endothermity
because only active endotherms survive in such cold climates.
Next, the professor
insists that it is not reliable that position and movement of the legs tells us
that the dinosaurs were endotherms. Because the dinosaurs' body was very large,
it cannot be accounted for the correlationship between endothermity and
position and movement of the legs. (because로 문장을 시작하지 말아주세요) This counters the reading passage's
assertion that position and movement of the legs located underneath a
dinosaur's body is the evidence of the endothermity since this position works
efficiently only to the endotherms.
Finally, the
professor argues that the bone structure cannot explain whether the dinosaurs were (시제 -> 과거) endotherms. The (대소문자 구분) dinosaurs have growth ring in their bone, which indicates
that the dinosaurs' bone do not grow up rapidly. In detail, the growth ring
shows that the bone grew slowly during cooling periods. This refutes the
reading passage's suggestion that the dinosaur's endothermity is related to
their bone structure considering Harversian canals which allow the living
animal to grow quickly.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*