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When people finished their university studies, they have to find the place to work. Of course, some people who get a job which is only executable in the designated area should go a specific area to work. But many students should select where they want to go and make a new opportunity for their future. Usually, they are considering two options, hometown or different towns. I assert that living in their hometown after completing the study in the university is better choice than living in different towns. There are reasons as follow. First and foremost, family can support the students who are just graduated from their school in their hometown. If rookies are independent from their parents, they tend to be very busy to deal with many things. For example, they should go by themselves to do diverse administrative duties and take proper procedures to enroll and get a aid in a specific form at the city hall. Furthermore, they should ready breakfast or dinner to eat. Don't forget that they just get a job right after graduating their school. In short, without parent's help, it is sincerely burdensome for them to meet several must-have to do list. In my sister case, she started her first work in her hometown. And her new home was very close to her parents house. So, everytime she needs a aid, her mother went to her place, consulted with her and finally gave a good advise or dealt with problems instead of her. Throughout her mother's continuous aid, she can solve many problems without a severe difficulties. Second, hometown could make them peaceful and stable in their daily life. Generally, when people meet new circumstances, they are easily get embarrassed by meeting unaccustomed things, especially for both physical aspect such as buildings around them and culture difference. To avoid unforeseen events, they make an effort to watch out new surroundings and neighbors. It cause absolutely tiredness of them. In hometown, all of everything is familiar with them. Thus, they are not nervous and have a stable mind. For example, my uncle who had a job in different town had had a quite strong stress at there. He lost his confidence in there and finally decided to come back to his hometown. And then, he could relieve his stress and did a good job. All in all, starting a job in hometown after completing their university study has several advantages. They could get a aid from their parents and make their mind
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