■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. | |
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▶ Your Answer :I agree that we should be always telling
the truth in any relationship which could be our friends, families and lovers. It's
a matter of the time for someone else to find out that we are hiding behind the
shadow. But telling the truth about us will lead us to solution that will be
faster than us trying to solve the problem individually.
The reason that I strongly believe that
telling truth is important is that, there could be a consideration that we
cannot solve by ourselves. In relationship, if we have the trust, we should be
able to rely on partner anytime. The would be the kind of relationship that I
would personally define as good. Based on my personal experience, telling truth
is easier than keeping a lie. If the relationship is and will be continuous, at
one point, they will notice that we are lying. And I believe in most cases,
this will lead the direction of the relationship into somewhat that both us and
the partner to feel discomfort when having a conversation.
Furthermore, telling the truth, just like
opposite to not telling truth, will lead the relationship to have stronger bond
between us and the partner. We cannot assure that always speaking the truth can
keep the 'peace between us', but however this can be the best way to solve
problem if it does become a problem between the relationship. If the problem is
out, it is matter of the time to find out the solution for the problem to be
solved. This would gain deeper trust in between us and the partner in most of
the cases. Some may believe that white lie is one of the way to consider about
the partner but it is more brutal kind of double edged sword compared to
telling the truth because what it actually does is that it just builds on like
a pile of sands flowing down the river.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the
statement that we should be always considering about telling the truth in any
kind of relationship as it is the one of the best ways to solve problem and
build the bond in the relationship in most of the cases. | |
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