Surrounded by too many things to deal
with, nowadays people are usually
forced to make quick decisions. They firmly believe that they have made a wise
decision and feel proud of their decision-making faculties. However, in my
opinion, a quick decision, which is
resulted from lacking of enough time and calmness, always misleads people to
failure.
First of all, we cannot understand
the situation well without enough time. All of
the things have advantages and disadvantages. Only (when) we ponder about the situation for a long time,
can we make wise decisions. To illustrate, in 2008, Korea
Bank (Bank of Korea), which is the
central bank in (of) South Korea, decided
to mingle (mingle?)
and administer Rimman (Lehmann) Brothers. But after a detailed analysis on RB (Roland Berger? NEVER
use abbreviation in TOEFL essay), it gave up the previous decision.
Before long, surprisingly, RB went
bankrupt and most of the companies that were directly and indirectly related to
it suffered from enormous damages. Clearly, if it had not been for an adequate
time to consider about the global
financial situation, Korea Bank (Bank of Korea) would not (have)
save(d) itself from lethal financial crisis that
might make the whole country go a
mass.
In addition, impulsive emotions make
us blind. People without cold brain (mind) do not observe the situation objectively so
that they have difficulties in making good decisions. Take my sister’s experience as an example. (Do not order in your essay) When she was a freshman,
she fell in love with a man and made an immediate decision to get married to (marry)
him. In spite of other family
members’ oppositions, her impulsive emotions let her keep going and started new wedding life at last. But it took a short
time for her to open her eyes to
realize the situation, regretting her quick decisions. Like this, people in
tumultuous emotions have a tendency to make a quick decision and fail in
getting satisfactory ramifications (results = ramification is not an appropriate connotation
here).
Taking above two things into account, it is obvious that too hasty decisions lead people to mistakes even failure and finally bring about miserable consequences. I strongly believe that only a long time and a cold brain allow us to end up success.