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이번에 새로 고등학교를 지원해보려 합니다. 지원하게 된 이유를 쓰라는데 아직 감이 잡히질 않습니다. 제 이야기만 너무 오래 끈것 같기도 하구요...완성되지 못한 에세이지만 여기까지의 내용 중 수정하실 내용이 있으시면 거침없이 태클 부탁드립니다. 싹다 갈아엎을 준비도 되어있습니다만, 형식을 유지하는 선에서 부탁드립니다. 부족한 저를 도와주실 분 안계십니까 ㅠㅠ To begin with, I considered a lot to choose
my major that I can develop and use my capabilities. When I was only 8 years
old I had a lot of things that I was interested, and want to do in the future.
Because of this thought, I have tried vary of things since I was in the
elementary school. From Robot programming to Mathematic education for the
gifted students. I attempted several times in various kinds subjects to find
what I am interested in and good at it.
First, I joined the robot programing class
since I was in the second grade. At that time, there was a trend of TV show
named robot battle. Lot of my friends also liked to watch those battles, and
our subject of conversation was always about who won the last night's battle.
However, even they liked to watch robot battle, none of my friends thought
about making robots like that. I decided to start to learn about robot
assembling and programming. Few students joined the robot class, but they gave
up in one or two months. I maintained to study about robots, and finally I
became a school champion of robot programming twice in a row. I learned that
success comes from the patience. I also joined the mathematics education for
gifted students over three years, and I realized that math is the most
interesting and great study in the world by studying about math more deeply. To
explain what I have learned in there specifically, mostly I debated about math
topics such as Zenon’s paradox, Poincar’s conjecture. Advanced math class made
me able to think creatively and objectively about things around me, so it was
the important change in my life.
I did not only studied every time, I joined
the school soccer team as the offender, and scored several goals for our team.
Except soccer, I played badminton too. I have learned badminton for more than 2
years. And about a year ago, I have went on a long walk through the National
Land of Korea to look back through past days that I have lived. I have felt a
lot of things while hiking the mountains and walking under the hot sun of
August. I have learned what I should have to do now, as a student by walking
more than 500km without any transportations and sleeping at the middle of the
mountain. This was the most important thing which happened in my life, because
after this march I decided to make Information Technology as my major. |