▶ Your Answer :
There is an argument over whether people
should spend more time with their family than time with their work. Some people
say that working is much more important because of financial factors. My view,
However, is that Spending time with family is much more significant than
working. This is largely because family members can give useful advices which
cannot get from work places. Moreover, people having more time with family are
happier.
To begin with, people can get useful
advices from family which is not possible to get from workplaces. These days,
lots of competition is common and even familiar to modern people. In work
place, the situation is not different. Although people spend a great amount of
time with their coworkers, they cannot discuss some private issues not related
to work. However, family members are the people who are understandable to other
family members in any case. To be specific, my cousin, Jane, had a difficult
time with her unhealthy mental. She often forgot what she has to do. Because her
mother had known her for a long time, her mother noticed that she was stressed
from his work and encouraged her to rest. Finally, my cousin could overcome her
difficulty. It is not her coworkers to help her to overcome the situation but
her mother who knows her very well. For this regard, family members are much
more important.
Moreover, people who have more time with
their family is more likely to satisfy their life. It is not the workplace to
make people more feel relaxation but the house where family live there.
Although people are close to their coworkers, they cannot be a family. In other
words, family members share some part or even large part of lives. They can
affect large part of lives each other. The study conducted from Harvard
University shows that satisfaction of first group who have more time with their
family is much higher than those of second group who have little time with
family and much time at workplace. This study also states that self-esteem of
first group of people is interestingly higher than the second group. According
to the study, family members are very important to each other.
To sum up, I believe that spending time
with family members is far more important than being at work for the two
reasons that I have mentioned above. First, useful advices not possible to
obtain from coworkers can be accessible from family members. Second, contentment
of people who have more time with their family is higher. |