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It becomes one of the global trends that people are getting less cooking and preparing food these days compared to those in twenty years ago. I think this trend would continue in the future on the grounds that single households have been increased gradually, and the number of taking a meal at home has been seriously reduced.
First of all, it is hard to deny that there are many people who significantly worry and care about their health so that try to eat healthy food by having home cooking meals. However, there are more people who live alone, the single households, than those who live with their family. And this leads to make people less take care of their meals because people tend to skip a meal or eat delivery food when live alone. There is an example which represents this tendency in Korea. Korean have made kim-chi in fall traditionally as a side dish shared within a family during winter and until next summer. However, it has been significantly decreased since people are getting less having a meal with family at home as the single household is augmented, and also as they prefer buying it in the markets. Consequently, this has contributed to advancing delivery and instant food so that most of the meals that have been usually cooked at home are possible to be delivered by just one phone call, or could be bought in the markets.
Second, the modern life style makes people difficult to make spare time to cook, and spend more time outside. The modern families have the bustling life style so that they spend most of their day at outside with others, and less time to stay at home, causing that they have less time to prepare food. In my experience from middle school to university, there was no time to eat food at home. In specific, I went to school right after getting up just like another students, which gave rise to skip breakfast habitually, and come home at too late time to have dinner, for extra activities. After getting a job, in addition, this life pattern was extended due to overworking and a get-together.
To sum, I firmly find that people are getting less cooking and preparing food as single houses rise and people continue modern tiring life style albeit there are still a few people who prefer cooking and try to make time for cooking. Therefore, the statement above would be a pinpointing prediction.
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