Thought-provoking
current issue concerns with the news sources, since the news often express it's
own thought. (Cannot understand) In other word, It becomes
polarized. When someone contact(s) those news, those people (he or
she = someone is singular) lose their (his) own critical
thoughts and believe what the news say even if it is prejudiced. To prevent these (this) kind of situation, I think attaining
information from various news sources is better than sticking with one news
source.
First, when it
comes to the
politics, one has to become critical.
He or she must have their own thoughts about what is going on. He or she must
be dispassionated (disinterested) and
impartial. If they insist to get information from one news sources, it
is clear that he or she will be partial. However,
If we look up various sources, he or she can conjecture his or her indepedent
thought. This can help him or her to select most reasonalble choice.
(You made your point with the first three sentences so
do not repeat. Further, there has to be an illustration of your idea, instead
of just telling what you think. The paragraph started with a political vantage
point. Then, this paragraph should concern politics.)
Second, various
news sources contain various news (provides variety).
This we can know without any doubt.
Reading various kinds of books is better than merely reading one type of book. This is undeniable fact. I can be a good
example of this. When I was middle school student, I really liked to read
science books and I was stuck to (kept) reading
that kind of books. However, after final exam, I realized that I was paying no
attention at developing (to knowing) other
subjects' knowledge. Then, I started
to read various kind(s) of books. Consequently,
I could get A+ in (on) every subjects. (It could have been
better had you given a more solid example.)
For these reasons
I mentioned above, (Summarize your points again here.)
I strongly believe that gaining information from various news sources is better
than sticking on to one news source.