*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecture deal with the function of the hammerhead sharks' shark’s unusually shaped head. The lecturer argues that the unusually shaped head of the hammerhead sharks does not have any obvious edge. This contradicts the writer’s argument that the hammerhead sharks' shark’s unique head structure has a lot of merits.
First of all, according to the lecturer, because of the shark’s head shape, the hammerhead sharks have has some drawbacks when it comes to vision. The hammerhead sharks can see distant objects, but if some objects are put directly in front of them, they cannot see those things, which means mean that they have a blind spot in vision. This counters the writer’s assertion that thanks to detached eyes, the hammerhead sharks have enhanced vision. 시력(시야)와 관련해 대립되는 주장이 잘 정리되어 있습니다.
Moreover, the lecturer goes on to say that the hammerhead sharks do not have a better sense of smell compared to other sharks. They usually detect smells as the same as other sharks and there is no study which has is proven that the hammerhead sharks have a better sense of smell. This refutes the writer’s claim that because they have nostrils that are spaced apart, they have a keen sense of smell. 후각이라는 요소를 대립점으로 제시한 점이나 detail을 연결한 부분 모두 좋습니다.
Lastly, the lecturer maintains that the hammerhead sharks do not use their head when steering. Instead of using their head, they use their backbone that is flexible enough to turn so quickly. This challenges the writer’s viewpoint that their unique uniquely shaped head allows them to turn quickly.
Writing 0–30 score scale
Good (24–28)
전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 파악하신 것 같아요. 각 문단의 point에 초점을 두고 대립되는 내용들도 잘 정리되어 있습니다. 제가 정확하게 지문의 내용을 모르는 상태에서 요약 형식이나 detail들만을 가지고 평가한 부분이므로 꼭! 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 내용 체크해주시기 바랍니다. 수고 많으셨습니다^^화이팅!