Different people have different opinions about the statement that experience is more important than books as gaining a knowledge source. In my opinion, however, books are a more significant source of information because it they enable people to get knowledge effectively and give with more deep, detailed information.
First of all, knowledge in books can be absorbed effectively, We can contact limitless information from books without taxing endeavors. If someone wants to know about a certain topic, they can just visit a library or a bookstore and search books that is are related to the topic. In contrast, experiential information requires not only a exhausting progress process but also time consuming work. For instance, if you want to know about a foreign nation likes Congo republic. Experiential knowledge needs you to visit the foreign country directly personally. There are so many requirements and processes in order to go to the country. Contrarily, you can figure out almost everything about Congo through [just a few steps] (조금더 구체적으로 설명하세요) with books.
On top of that, books contain more deep and concentrated knowledge than the experiential way. Thanks to [numerous eminent ancient] (형용사가 많아지면 문장이 길어져서 문장 뜻을 제대로 전달 하지 못하게 됩니다) scholars and usefulness of characters, text materials are able to accumulate huge amounts of information. On the contrary, experiential knowledge have has no choice but to be descended by [face-to-face] (이표현 보다는 mouth-to-mouth를 더 사용합니다) method. Therefore, experiential know-how are susceptible to lose significant information in the descending process. According to the Institution of Korean Intangible Artifacts, traditional intangible experts have consistently diminished due to a decrease of [followers and troubles in transactions] (개인적으로 이 문장을 이해하는데 까지 5번 읽었는데, 무슨 뜻을 표현하실려고 하셨는지 잘 모르겠네요). However, information on books is still growing since humans have started to write on papers.
For better living, both knowledge sources are [required](required같은 말을 사용하실때 조심하세요, 반드시 필요하다고 말씀 하시는건 과장된 표현일수도 있습니다). However, books gives more valuable knowledge and it they provides information efficiently. For these reasons, i I strongly believe that books are a more crucial source for spreading knowledge.
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