It has been argued
among many people whether younger people can teach older people and it is
helpful. Although it is true that older people have experienced and learned a
lot as they age, I believe that older people can have numerous benefits if they
listen to the younger ones. In this essay, I am going to give two reasons
supporting my idea.
To begin with,
there have been a number of technological developments that older people had
never met (seen)
before. These days, the pace of science
improvement (in science) is getting faster and
faster, so it is very tough for older people to catch up with trends. They may
have trouble getting used to how to use sophisticated electronic devices such
as smart phones, smart pads and smart TV. However, younger people are likely to
adapt (to) these flows of changes and they behave like experts even if they are not.
This shows that younger people now can utilize the newest instruments (devices)
released recently and they never have difficulty keep(ing)
up with today`s scientific breakthrough. Therefore it is the best way for older
people to learn how to use (the devices) and be
used to technological development these days. Otherwise, they might lose
valuable opportunities to see their loved ones` photo in any time and any
place.
On top of that, it
is very effective for older people to cooperative and listen to younger
people`s advices. It is natural that older people do
(show) great performances in their work because
they have accumulated lots of experiences and overcome substantial obstacles.
However, they are people, so they
cannot work perfectly even if they have done the best since things have changed
a lot comparing today to past. What they learned may be wrong these days and
what they ignored may be considered very important in their filed. In this
case, younger people can help the older ones do better consequences (job)
because they are educated by up-to-date knowledge. Also they are so passionate
that they are likely to do anything if it is very critical and serious
problems. Passion and knowledge that younger people possess can have great and
positive influences on older people.
(These
two paragraphs above are okay grammatically. However, you tried to make too
many points in a single paragraph. Some of the details seemed too much to
mention, which consequently made it lagging. Instead of adding extra points of argument,
start telling your personal experience, cite a research, or provide solid
reasoning on one specific point per paragraph.)
To sum up, it is
very important for older people to learn from the younger ones because they can
help them make use a lot of devices made recently the older ones have never learn how to use
and work better by using their fervor and understanding. Therefore I certainly
believe that older peole are required to learn from younger people.