▶ Your Answer :.
Every person want to and try to succeed whatever
it is. However, it is controversial whether people should do the same thing with
other people so as to succeed. I believe that it is not good for you to behave
in same way in order to succeed because if you do in the case, you can do only
the same thing with others and you have to make an effort more than others do.
To begin with, if you do in the same way
with other people, you can just get the same thing. I don’t think that it is
not a true success. That is because I think that a real success is that someone
has different one which others cannot do easilly. To be more specific, it is
usually easy for you to do the thing which many people can do. Then, even
though you can do well that, you cannot think that it is real success for your
life. Therefore, for your real success, you have to do in different way with
others.
Second, I strongly believe that you have to
make more an effort to achieve your goal, which cannot be reached easilly, than
any other do in order to succeed. What I mean is that your persistant effort is
not the same thing with others’. People often fail to achieve their goal for
various reasons ranging from laziness to deficient motivation. For example, even
though high school students should do make an effort to study for their future
job and the quality of life, many students fail to do their best for studying
because there are a lot of things distracting them such as TV, computer, and
cartoons. In that situation, some students do study more than other students do.
I think that this small effort should be considered as the different thing from
others. Therefore, you must behave differently with others for your success.
To conclude, I think that you have to do
the different things and do differently with other people if you want to
succeed. That is because you can achieve only the same thing with other people
if you do in the same way with others and you have to more effort to make a
success than others do. |