As a job
market require(s) a
knowledged person (professionals) who
have various information across the subjects, prestigious universities are
opening the lectures with different kinds of subjects. Since this broaden(s) the perspectives, I strongly believe that students
study many different kinds of fields, even if those things are not their major.
On top of that, connecting the different kinds of areas that (do not) seem to be not
related is important for their success.
(You spell different as diffrent. You should not make such
spelling mistake. Be careful!)
To start
with, students should take classes in many different subjects for the wider
perspectives. This is mainly because that taking various classes makes them
experience different kinds of things from learning in
(from) the books or pictures. To illustrate
that, I took the ratin (Latin) language class when I was freshman in
university and it definitely helped me to broaden my perspectives, because I
experienced the culture and history of Europe throughout the class. If I took the other class about the economics, which is
my major, I (would) have (had) no chance to know about the ratin
(Latin) culture. (Latin
culture and Latin are different. The culture usually refers to the Spanish,
South American culture unrelated to the language that prevailed throughout
Roman Empire.)
(You should check your spelling as you write.. I corrected
all of them without making correction marks.)
Furthermore,
taking the classes in different subjects help students to connect the idea
across the fields. Due to the development to the search engine, it is no more
important to get know only one field
deeply, but connect the knowledge across the fields and make a creative idea.
The best example of this is Steve Jobs, the pre-executive of Apple. He once
delivered the speech about the way of success in the Stanford univerisity (University)
and there, he said that "connecting the dots" is important : it means
you can get the revolutional (progressive) idea by connecting the knowledge across
the subjects. As he told, He could be the head of (a)
computer company since he took the class about the calligraphy.
To summarize, I think that students should take various classes which is dealing with many subjects, since it helps them to broaden their perspectives. In addition, they could be creative by linking diverse subjects.
(You have two issues that will greatly affect your grade in
the real test:
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Spelling
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Using the
words that do not exist
They are considered the very basics of academic writing.
Without fulfilling the basic requirements, your quality of writing – besides spelling
and word choice – will not be reflected on you grade by TOEFL.)