People often make a large group to get along with each
other, and there are many clubs (that provides us the
chance) to play with a lot of people. However, I found (find) it uncomfortable and uneasy. Therefore, I agree
with the topic (given statement = it’s okay to write
topic, but this sounds better) that spending time with one or two close
friends is better. This is because, getting
along with many friends is hard to decide one
idea that every members in a group would agree.(makes it harder to agree on one idea that everyone can be
satisfied.) Moreover, spending time in a small group has less
possibility to quarrel.
First of all, people have thier own idea, so it is
hard to unite in (under) one idea.
If there are a lot of people in a group, there
would be many ideas and opinions. Therefore, it is almost impossible for them
to make their opinions into one. (Do not repeat the same point) Even if they decide the (on) one idea, there would be other people who do not
agree with that. And there are even people who follow that idea unintentionally.
For example, when I was in the swimming club, all members in (of) the club were getting along with each other all
the time. However, members (we) always have (had) different ideas about doing something and it was
hard to decide into one idea.
As a result(,) we often quarreled and began to seperate within (leave) the team. After all, the club members rarely
got together unless there were important events in which they have (we had) no choice but to participate. Thus, we found
nothing but getting along with a lot of people uncomfortable.
On top of that, spending time with one or two close
friends has less possibility to be at odds with each other. (This is the same point as the one on the first paragraph.)
People usually get together who have many things in common. Therefore, it is
rare to find each other different. (This contradicts
with the earlier statement that ‘all people have different opinion.’) They
have more possibility to agree with each other's idea, so they can spend their
time without any conflict. Although (Even when) one of
them has different idea about deciding something,
they can adjust their opinions (come to terms) by
yielding (to) each other. For instance, I often
see other
(my) friends in the university
who are getting along each other in a group which has two of (or) three member(s). They (It) seem(s) that they
have less conflict than other groups that have more than three members, because
they have a lot in common. Moreover, their relationships even last(s even) after
the graduation.
In conclusion, spending time with one or two friends
is better than (spending time) with a large
group of friends. This is because a large group (of)
friends have hard time to communicate(ing)
each other. On the other hand(,) a small group
can agree with each other well.
(The overall composition
is very neat and clear, and you can aim for high score at the actual test.
However, you need to improve your grammar a lot. Seeing grammatical mistakes
continuously certainly degrades your score on the test.)