쓰다보니 길어지고 오래 걸렸네요.. 559자 였어요. 짧게 쓰자니 말이 안되고, ;;;
하지만 첫번째 것 보다는 30분 덜 걸렸어요 ㅋㅋㅋ
볼드체는 사전 보고 적은 건데요.. 자신이 없으니..
(다른 것도 마찬가지이긴 하지만.. 외우려구요;;) 틀렸는지 맞는지도.. 좀 가르쳐 주세요.;
언제나 수고 하시는 훈제 연어님 이리 더운데도 변함없이 첨삭해주셔서 고맙습니다.
토픽은 사람들은 스스로 결정을 내리는 것을 선호하는가? 입니다..
It is often said that following advice of more intellectual people would be wiser than making decision by oneself, since they have more information. However, as far as I’m concerned, people consider others’ advice and given information just as a reference for two reasons: everyone knows that they have to have responsibility on the results followed by their decision, and modern people have tend to be doubtful to others’ saying.
First of all, people are very well aware of no one who takes charge of their life on behalf of themselves. Situation we are in now is based on our decisions we have made living until now, and the man who ultimately has to solve problems and endure hard times is not our adviser, but ourselves. Grown up and being an adult, we acutely realize such universal truth since one’s choice can endanger his or her living or career. Thus, there is no way but to think more carefully about what would be the best decision for our life, so people tend to decide what to do in the future themselves In 2000, the psychology department of Chicago University conducted a research on what is considered the most important thing when it comes to decision-making, targeting adults aged 30 to 60. Its results presented that 72 percent of them regards the effects on what they consider as the most important thing in their life including money and happiness of their family. Second many people were importantly thinking if they could keep their pride from their decision, and the response that which choice would be ethically justified was the third. Believes on life are different person to person, and thus people would reluctant to act just as they are advised even though their advisers are more erudite than them.
Also, people tend to do not believe another person. Modern society has higher crime rates since the number of people has been increased, and resources have been gradually exhausted rapidly; thus competition for almost everything is very keen. Fierce competitions are likely to cause wrong information floating about, and bring about fights between people. Therefore, people have come to be more doubtful to other’s saying than believe and follow. Let me give my experience for example. When I was in college, from one of my friends, I heard the questions of the midterm exam would be very similar to the last year’s those. Since I had a lot of tests to take before the test, I decided to study only about the questions set at the last year’s examination. However, after I took the test, I realized the information was completely wrong. If I had not listened to the one of my friend, I would have studied base on what the professor had underlined, and I could get better grade. This kind of affair does not happen only in university. In society, there are more accidents which can cause much more serious results. Since people also know this ill of modern society, they are more likely to make decision on their own.
In summary, a lot of people misbehave to win fierce competitions, and most people know such a disease of modern society. Also, living as adults, people know their decision would directly influence their living and careers. Therefore, people would not let other people choose what they themselves do in the future.