Does failure lead to success?
People sometimes fail to approach their
dreams. As the saying "failure is the mother of success" implies, I (personally) think personally that much more
failure makes your dream possible. In this
essay, I will explain why failure makes people success. (You don’t need such statement as it’s obvious you will.)
To begin with, failure makes people
enlightened (to) such
as conceit, (and) ack of ability which people have overlooked. For
example, when I was a students in the
middle school, I was good at mathematics. So I don't study hard and eventually
I got a low grade. This makes me awake my
conceit (has alarmed me enough.).
Another reason why I think much more failure
is a good teacher is that people who suffered failure are not scared of failure
again. On the other hand, (, while) people who only experience a success
are afraid of failure and do not challenge (for) new somethings. For instance, the company
which is scared of failure do(es) not challenge (for) new research and development. Eventually, the company
would go bankrupt (lose its
competitiveness). Also(,) I think that
failure is not a negative words because I think that it provides people
who suffered failure with the chance to do challenge another
something. But again and again failure makes people frustrated. (I cannot understand the last two sentences’ relationship to
the rest of essay.)
For example, many people commit suicide
because of continuous business failure.
However, If people endure repeated failure, they would be successful. In other words, I personally think that the more people suffer failure the more they will succeed. Therefore, I agree the assertion that failure leads to success and I recommend that enjoy failure if you can't avoid failure. (Incomplete conclusion. This is not how you write it. If there is another point to make, make a third paragraph. If there isn’t, just Recap the statement that you made in your essay.)