Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others
prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use
specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Students
learn a lot of knowledge from a huge university in a big city and people work
for a company with a reasonable salary. These pictures are what nowadays we easily watch in a big city and
one of the reasons that I think that living a big city outweigh(s) living in countryside. Of course, someone who are (is) sick and need(s) the (to) rest would rather stay in countryside. Also(,) young boys before entering an elementary
school have lots of advantages to live(ing) in a small town,
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because
they need big and clean place to play and commune with nature while playing and
running on the forest in countryside, it will help them have good identity and
healthy. As they are growing up, however, they need a higher education such as
university so they need to move on a big city for attending institute. Furthermore,
after they graduate the university, they need to get a job. In a big city,
there is a plenty of opportunities rather than a small town.
In addition, as people are getting old, they
need a big major hospital when they get severe problems on their body, such as
a heart-attack which is really dangerous if you can’t go to hospital as soon as
it happens. Therefore, elderly would rather stay around a big hospital where
they can get to in 10 minutes.
For those reasons, I believe that people have a lot of advantages to live a big city rather than a small town for every age people except young boys.