▶ Topic : Classmates have more influence than parents do on a child's success in school.
There is an arguement over whether who more effect on a child's success in school.Some people believe that parents have more more influence than classmates do on a child's success in school.However, contrary to the opinion, i claim that peers are more influence on a student's success. Frist, peers can communicate better than parents. Second, classmates good partner.
To begin with, peers can communicate better than student's parents.
Most parents do not listen and acknolweged to their son and doughter's achievement. They think their students are too young to do by themselves so, parents do not try to listen to them. In my case, although, I want studying of the art, my mother says art can not make me rich. I try make her understand what I want but, she discourage me from her words. One of my friend, Kasia try stay with me and listen my words.My firend, she has simarily worries so, she didn't say anything to me but, she gave to me ticket for art exhibition. From my firend's act, I was happy because, I can talk and share with someone, that make me brave.
As example shows,althogh, mojority people need communication, it is hard to find. If parents can be good communicater then that would be great. However, that is rare happen in reality life. But, peers have same stage of life, that makes understanding better than partent.
Moreover, peers will be good partner. School is education place where it makes people bettter person. Student learn same things at the same time. we can do competition and challenge with school duties. From this things, they can earn some practical advice.
For example, when I was university student, I have big project with my team. I was leader of my team so, I made most plan and analay to their duties. That was hard time in where make people finish their work on time. Although, I have lots of stress that make me depress and wanted giving up, I try keep listen to them and find the problems. We solve the problem together. Finally, we can finish our duties on time. We got good score and got more good friendship and workship.
Therefore, it seems beneficial that classmate will be good partner on kid's success in school. They will be better person.
To sum up, peers can communication better than their partents. On the other grounds that stduents are easily motivate their peers,and classmate can provide better help with the materials that they are studying.
For there reasons, I strongly agree with the opinion that classmates have more influence than parents do on a child's success in school.
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