■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic : Do you agree or
disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important
influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
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▶ Your Answer :
Parents can be
great teaches because they care about their children more than anyone else.
However, personally, I think the classmates have greater influence on children’s
success in school than the parents. Success in school can be getting good
grades, but it also means enjoying studying and having fun at school.
Classmates can be a good friend and a good teacher at the same time.
To begin with, children can learn
more things while they study with their classmates. They can share and compare their
work. That will help them improve their work. Besides, being at school, children
get along with their classmates. As a result, they will learn how to cooperate
and understand each other. Accordingly, children can learn more things with
classmates that can’t be taught by their parents.
Moving on, classmates are helpful
for the children to success in school because they make school more fun. Children
learn things at school. So, it’s important to keep the process fun and
exciting. From my own experience, I had a very great time when I was in 3rd
grade. I met a bunch of great classmates and had a lot of fun at school. I
enjoyed every class and every activity and it came back with good performances
in classroom. Classmates spend most of the time together, so they have lots of
common interests. They can work with their projects, play sports together, or just
talk to each other. Classmates will help the children to have more fun at
school. That will lead the children to be more excited about their studies.
In conclusion, I think classmates have
major influences on children’s success in school. Children can learn social and
study skills by working with their classmates. Also, classmates make the school
life more enjoyable, which leads to increased interest in learning. | |
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