▶ Your Answer : Some people might think that parents should devote more time doing schoolwork with them than spending a lot of time playing games or sports with their children. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. First, playing with children affects on their life significantly. Second, children could be stressed by their parents.
To begin with, personality is made by parents in their childhood. The emotional relationship between parents and children is important issue all over in their life. Playing games or sports gives a lot of chances for them to build a robust relationship. There is a survey that shows people to significance of these things. The 64D institution investigated that how parents’ partnership affects on children's personality formation. One group that had much time to play with their parents was 78% higher in their positive action and also their academic performances than another group. Consequently, this result means that forming good disposition of children is based on having enjoyable time with their parents.
On top of that, it can be a stress for their children to doing schoolwork with their parents. Children already study with their teachers in their school. After finish their school, they have to rest in their home. However, if parents give their children pressure or keep watching them, they could be stressed out, and it can ultimately lead to break of their relation. One of my friends is in this case. She was very positive and active children until 7 years. However, her parents started to interfere her schoolwork and gave amount of stress. Therefore, she got to angered and fled from home, and also her personality was deteriorated. She said that it was very horrible to receive amount of stress from their parents.
To sum up, playing with their children is helpful for forming a great personality of children. Moreover, when parents devote too much their time in schoolwork, it can cause more severe problems. In this regard, I firmly believe that parents should spend a lot of time playing games with their children.
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