■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
In order to encourage children to study
harder, parents should avoid letting them watch television. |
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▶ Your Answer : There might be some
people who don’t believe that in order to encourage children to study harder,
parents should avoid them watching television. However I personally disagree
with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. First, watching TV distract
children’s attention. Second, television makes children tired. To begin with watching TV makes children hard
to concentrate on their study. Since TV has variety of programs, there is
always TV show which attract children’s attention. Once they get attracted, it
is hard for children to stop watching TV. Also, addiction of TV is really
severe that even if they are doing other things such as study or exercise,
their mind is filled with thought about TV. Let me bring up my personal story as an
example. When I was in high school, I lived in school’s dorm and there was no
TV. But I visited my home one in a two week. I studied well at dorm but I
couldn’t focus on study at home. Because I spent more than 2 hours just
watching TV. I knew I needed to be changed but I couldn’t. Eventually I
destroyed TV by myself and then I could concentrate on my study even when I was
at home.
In addition Television makes Children tired.
Even if the one couldn’t realize it, watching TV makes person to consume a lot
of energy. Eyes and ears are used for flashing video and noisy sound. Also our
brain takes a lot of image and information from TV. And this leads people to be
exhausted. According to a study conducted by Korea Medical University, people
who watched TV one hour a day have experienced 20% more tiresome and fatigue
than people who don’t watch TV. This research show how TV can make people tired
In conclusion Watching TV cause children hard
to concentrate and make them tired. If parents want them to study hard it is
essential for them to make their children avoid it. |
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