It is great importance for Most of parents and teachers to teach children in a proper manner. For this purpose, They employ a variety of methods to maximize the potential of students. However, the opening time of school is controversial among them. In my opinion, It appears true that starting the school by late time would be more reasonable option for the following subsequent reasons (그리고 대문자는 문장 시작할 때만 서술하시길 바랍니다).
First and foremost, Early in the morning, students can’t concentrate with full potential at classes early in the morning students cannot concentrate. Many students have a hard time getting out of their bed every morning. Since they have to go to early in the morning, most of the students are in a rush. For example, My friend have 13 years old son. Even though, he was a bright student in learning, he was in a rush every single day to go to school early. As a matter of fact, He had a hard enduring time overcoming the pressure that he must be on time in morning class. Sometimes, he had to even imagine about losing the phase of class. Because of those obstacles he had, he was in a stress and burned out every morning. On the other hand, with given surplus time to students, they can be more relaxed and comfortable with the time. As a result, students could utilize surplus time to prepare for the lecture in late time. This will enhance the confidence about classes, as well as level of concentration.
To conclude, the condition of student is an important factor for sure in learning. Although, some students might not utilize the surplus time given in a proper way, opening early time classes in the morning would be the more reasonable approach for students to study.
한 단락에 너무나 많은 정보를 넣으려고 하는 독립형 에세이입니다. 너무나 많은 정보를 한단락에 넣으려고 하다 보니 전반적으로 에세이가 장황합니다. 에세이가 장황하면 본레 자기가 전달하려고 했던 의미들이 변질되기 때문에 좀 더 간결하게 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 또한 대문자는 문장 시작할 때만 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.