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Some people
think that competition is useful to motivate students to study hard. However,
in my opinion, inordinate competition among friends is harmful since it makes
one yearn for others to fail and consume their most time to be the winner in
the competition. It is obvious that they effects negatively on friendship.
To begin
with, moderate competition is sometimes helpful for students to concentrate on
their study to achieve better grades than others. Nevertheless, as a rule of
thumb, moderate competition would be excessive competition in short time.
Consequently, students wish their rivals to have some mistakes on tests or
provide wrong information. I give my experience as an example. When I was freshman
in a high school, I usually hung out with my first friend, Tom, before the
first mid-term exam. The results of the
test was so incredible due to the fact that I was the first rank and he was the
second rank in my class. After the notice, he no longer talked with me closely
and even he didn’t provide me the information of alternation of the science
quiz to make me confuse. So I was really disappointed and never have met him
until now.
On top of
that, most competition occurs in the studying parts. Also it is natural that
students cannot make time for friends with the flow of time due to the fact
that a greater part of time is consumed for reading the books or solving math
problems. This trend is very common in my country. The inordinate competition
forces student’s parent and students to spend their time in private academy or
tutoring. It has significantly non-positive influence on friendship, since they
cannot have time to pass with their friends and they are too tire to enjoy
their precious time when they finish studying. I also could not make good
relationships with my friends in the first semester of third grade in high school
because of the pressure of competition and lack of free time.
To sum
up, excessive competition make worsen the relationship among friends since they
occasionally use unfair ways to win. Moreover, they cannot get along with
friend as they use up much time to compete and study. For those reasons, I
firmly believe that friendship will be better if there is no completion. 예상 점수도 부탁드립니다!!!!!
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