▶ Your Answer : Someone claims that having a part time job at a store of stranger is palatable. (새로운 문장으로 시작해주세요) However, I am of the opinion that working at a business run by my family has invaluable benefits. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, I can learn a sense of responsibility. To be more specific, it can be difficult for the majority of employees to dedicate their company because there is no direct connection between working place and them. Thus, a lot of workers do not strive to achieve high performance. On the contrary, at the company which is (be동사 필요) operated by members of my family, the situation is reversed. In attempt to earn high profits, whole family contributes (주어 동사 불일치) their all concentrations and this process allows them to learn a responsibility. My own example is a compelling example of this. When I was in a high school, my parents began a business which had sold a variety of shoes. The store was very crowded, thus parents decided to hire a part time worker. They chose a (관사 필요합니다)_ boy around my age, and (연결어) it turned out a bad decision in a short period. This boy, Morgan, did not satisfy expectation of my parents, because he was frequently late and even absent without prior notice. Since he just was likely to make some spending money, he never dedicated himself to the our store. Finally, my mother fired him. I had no choice but to work at my parents' (소유격) store and already recognized that this store was very precious for my family since all living cost of family came from this business. Therefore I promised with myself to keep arrival time and do best of (전치사) my job. In this process, I learned a sense of responsibility. However, like (대소문자) Morgan, the boy fired by my mother, if I worked at a shop that had nothing to do with me, I would not have done my best.
Secondly, there is less opportunity for a breakup between employer and employee, which probably occurs to a careless novice. These days, a number of people start their own business. However some CEO or owner are incline to ignore basic working regulation or stipulation such as working hour or salary. Many teenagers who do not know the world are fooled by these unconscionable owners. Fortunately, these cases (단수/복수) are unlikely to occur by working at family business. For instance, my brother was deceived by malicious owner three years ago. As a photograph major, he began his first part time job at the nearby studio. But, lacking of working experience, he carelessly read the contraction and this neglect behavior caused a severe situation. The owner of studio provided my brother with a wage lower than minimum one for a four months. He helplessly announced his situation to me, thus I sued this owner. Conversely, working at a my parents` shoes store, I had never received (과거 분사) the wage under minimum and also all working conditions were well kept.
Consequently, I believe that it is more valuable to take a job at a family business. This is because the majority of employees learn a sense of responsibility since they know the value of their business. Another reason is that some owners are prone to deceive their young workers, however, family take their members carefully.
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