■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Summarrize the points made in the lecture bing sure to explain how they oppose the specific points ade in the reading passage.
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer opposes the three good points
of wave energy-facilities which are ‘reliability’, ‘environmental friendly way’,
and ‘no negative impact on landscape’.
First, the article noted that wave
energy-facilities are reliable due to the predictable climate at the ocean.
However, the lecturer points out the common malfunction of generator at the
harsh environment which is common at the ocean. In this regard, lecturer thinks
that a new-tech at the unstable circumstances is far from the reliability.
Second, though the article mentioned that
wave-energy facilities are not making any toxic pollution causing materials, in
the lecturer’s view, the word ‘environmental friendly’ cannot be suitable. The
rubber composing the wave-energy facilities are containing toxic materials that
can be harmful to (전치사 필요합니다) the ocean. Thus, when observing the full-facility itself rather
than just generating process, it can have bad effects to environment.
Last, the article advocates the appearance
of wave-energy facilities compared to the fossil fuel generator or nuclear
generator, but (연결어 필요합니다) the lecturer has different point of view. To make wave-energy
facilities be seen from the vessels at the ocean, the facilities must have
bright color. That means, it cannot be a part of natural landscape but the
exotic bright structure in the middle of ocean.
In this regard, the lecturer opposes the positive
views of wave-energy facilities in three ways.
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