It is better to complain in person than in wrtiting |
The issue at hand(the issue? just hand??관사 사용이 잘못된경우.) is whether it is more better to say complaint in writing or in person. --> It is an issue that or whether !(*)(#*_*$_@)$_( is an issue.
In my view, I(repetitive my view and I) believe talking directly(to whom?? ㅅtalk는 목적어가 필요해용) to complain is much better than sending letters or writing e-mail(writing 이나 sending 둘중 하나는 없어도 될듯..). For one, I can talk my complaints and express in more direct way. Another is It takes less time to complain in person.(interesting way to put your reasons... ummm 다른 방법도 있을듯 kinda awkard) Complaining in person is much better than in writing because it is much better to express feelings and complain more directly. ---->because in this way we can directly express our frustrations (to the customer service worker.)
Since I can use my facial expressions and body languages while I talk, it is much easier and faster to say my complaints to somebody. 첫문장과 두번째 문장이 약간 반복인듯..)
Other person(other person 보다는 Service worker or Interlocuter.. 모르겠습니당... 아구구구..(이럴때 무슨 말쓰는지 생각이 안나요 죄송..) will understand rapidly what I am saying rapidly(rapidly가 여기있어서 꼭 이렇게 해석되요/내 가 빨리 말할때..... adverb should go next to the verb.그런데 rapidly 가 여기에 적절한지가 의문 이네요 rapidly는 꼭 성장속도가 빠르다 할때 쓰거든요) by talking face to face. If I complain in writing such as letters or e-mail, other person can misunderstand or ignore what I am complaining about. From my personal experience, I once left a message in front of my neighbor's house because of the irritating noises every night(뒤로 보내세용) that my neighbor makes every night. I thought leaving message will(시제 일치would) be much better to complain about the noise at first however, it wasn't a good way to complain. 문장을 끈어주세요! ----> I initially thought that leaving a message would be better; however, it was not such a good idea over all.
My neighbor just neglect my complaints and didn't stop making noises. In this respect, saying complaints in person can be much uncomplicated way to complain. (complanits 말 고도 많은 단어로 똑같은 의미를 표현할수있다고 생각됩니당)
In additional, saying complaints in person can take less time than in writing. If I write my complaints to other people, due to the time it takes to transfer the letter to other person, it will take much time to transmit my words of complaint. I have to wait until I get the reply from them. Also, if someone doesn't reply back, it will take much time for me to check if the person got my letter or not. I might even have to send another letter to the person. It's more complicated to complain in writing than in person. To illustrate, I send a letter to my school teacher about my complaints about the school system that I didn't like. However, since she didn't give me the reply, I couldn't know whether she got the letter or not. So I had to call her in order to check whether she got the letter. In conclusion, I strongly believe talking about my complaints to other person is an optimal way to complain than writing to them. I can express my words more directly and it takes less time to do it. On the whole, complaining in direct ways can be much better than indirect ways.
죄송해요 intro 랑 첫문단밖에 첨삭못해드려서 꼭 다해드릴께요 내일 와서 그럼...(여기는 잘시간이라 ..)
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