토플라이팅 게시판인건 알지만ㅠ (지금 저도 물론 토플공부중이지만) 지원서를 쓰는데 너무 형편없는거 같아서ㅠ 고수님들의 시간을 5분만 투자해서 검토좀 해주셨음 해서요ㅠ 시간없으시면 걍 지나치셔도 돼요ㅠ 죄송합니다
I'm Thomas. I'm a junior at AC Univ. and my major is material science. This studying abroad program is not just language training for me. I am under consideration of studying abroad after graduation at Stanford Univ. or CALTECH. Therefore it would be a very important opportunity to experience American university and Western culture. My first goal is to develop the colloquial English. One semester in US will be very helpful to increase my ability to speak in English. While I traveled in New York last year, I could make easy conversation with natives. However, when I am questioned suddenly, it was so hard to answer and I realized that my English is so formal and unfamiliar to natives. I think the only way to improve colloquial expression is talking a lot with foreign friends and this is the one of major reason why I apply to this program. Not only that but I can experience Western culture which is little different with Korean. Most of all, I heard American students discuss a lot about subject, which is unfamiliar in Korea. So I really wished to study in that atmosphere with friends. And I am interested in artistic field, for example, piano and dance. If I get a chance, I hope to play with American friends in a band or dance club. The third and most important goal is related to my future. My major is material science, and more specifically, I want to study about aerospace material in the future. Unfortunately, AC Univ. does not provide aerospace courses, but UIUC has great curriculum, therefore it would be a best opportunity for me to gain basic knowledge about aerospace engineering. I’m interested in courses about propulsion engine such as Compressible, Incompressible Flow. Moreover, I also want to take higher courses in material science field, for example, Microstructure Characterization and Atomic Scale Simulations, which are not provided at AC Univ. To increase colloquial English, to experience American culture, and to get basic knowledge about aerospace engineering, UIUC is the most ideal and the only university, and that is the reason why I apply to UIUC at 1st rank. During one semester's break(휴학), I increased my English ability with preparing IBT test, and even now I'm preparing GRE test. Also, I took English courses like Thermal Dynamics and theory of complex function at AC Univ. Therefore, I’m not afraid of taking courses in US. I think this studying abroad program as a stepping stone to my future. I am sure that I will gain valuable experience through one semester. Thank you.
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