Nowadays, majority of people cannot avoid Television since almost everyone is watching it. Television has a lot of entertaining programs that gives us topics of conversation. Without watching TV, it is hard to have a conversation with other friends. Because people spend a lot of time watching TV, spend time on watching TV a lot, most some people think TV is destroying communication among people. Even though many people think TV destroyed communication with others because of its spending time, watching TV promotes to communicate with other people.
순서가 뒤죽박죽인거 같아요. 정리가 안된 느낌 ..
아래에 내용은 추가 안하고 순서만 바꿨어요:)
Nowadays, majority of people cannot avoid Television since almost everyone is watching it. Television has a lot of entertaining programs that gives us topics of conversation. Because people spend a lot of time watching TV, spend time on watching TV a lot, most some people think TV is destroying communication among people. Even though many people think TV destroyed communication with others because of its spending time,However, watching TV promotes communication to communicate with other people. Without watching TV, it is hard to have a conversation with other friends.
내용면에서는
바디1=웃음을 유발해서 대화를 유도한다.
바디2=친구만들때 ice-breaker로 좋다.
이런식으로 개요를 짜서 쓰시면 좋겠어요:)
We get most information and news through media such as computer, newspaper, and TV. Without knowing news from outside of world through media it is hard to share common topics with others. For instance, I usually don't talk with my father at home because we don't have much in common. have similar topics. However, we talk to each other when we are watching news or soccer. We talk about our thoughts while we are watching TV. TV provides my family topics so that we have better chance to talk with each other. It not only gives my family common topics but also laughter. At home I don't feel like talking to to talk with others when everyone is quiet and gloomy. Once someone laughs while they are watching TV, we start to talk.
At school students don't talk each other frequently except when they talk about TV shows or comedy. For example, one of my friends was a loner at school. He had many friends when he was in Korea because he could talk about anything he wants. Since he doesn't know about American teenagers' culture, he never watched comedy and didn't know about comedy. Although everyone tried to speak with him, they always gave up because he didn't have same common topics with them. I recommended him to watch funny comedies on TV. He started to talk with friends when they talk about comedy on TV.
TV might stop conversation while people are watching, however, after the show they have better chance to talk about it. It will give a common topic for people and laugh. As people have more common, they become friends. From many aspects, watching TV doesn't destroy communication among people. |